G324 - Rough Cut 2 and Feedback

 -Happy that the shell shot has gone
-When one of the band members is playing the guitar you are not able to see all of the guitar and the shot is too long.
-Beach scene is much better
-Lovely comedic elements
-Glad the present has changed
-Solo isn't on the guitar
-Some shots too long
-Like the close ups of the instruments
-Really like the Christmas scenes
-Great lyric visual relations
-Great locations
-Good instrument shots
-Pouring wine shot is too long
-Good montage
-Instruments occasionally not in frame
-Bass headstock gets in the way of guitar solo shot
-Good narrative
-Establishing shots are brilliant
-Some performance shots are too long
-Really good beach shots
-Good use of locations, costumes and actors
-Lip syncing is good

From this feedback we will change the shot of one of the band members where you can only see part of his guitar as we got this feedback from rough cut one and rough cut 2. We have also had several comments on the length of some of our shots. We will change some of these shots and add in new shots to make sure we have shorter shots.

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