G324 - Rough Cut 1 and Feedback

 -Nice performing shots
-Lovely boat shot
-Narrative is clear- nice comedic elements
- Don't like the shell shot
-Nice whole band shot
-Video is appropriate for song
- Nice use of pan on beach and bench shot
- Nice montage at the end
-Nice consistent use of close ups
-Possibly more band shots
-No shaky shots
-Range of shots is good
-Good lip syncing
-Great transitions
-Cuts well timed
-Nice framing and continuity
-Like the bird over the sea
-In instrumental with guitar solo, couldn't really see the hand playing the guitar
-Interesting locations and shots

From this feedback we are going to change the elements that people did not like or did not think worked well. We will change the shell shot in this rough cut as we also do not think that it works well in the video and does not help the narrative flow properly. To replace any shots of the narrative that we change we may also add in more band shots, as that was some of the feedback we got.

Posted by Abby